Looking for advice on how to help others

Hello ladies and Gents,

My names Kobyn, over in Canada, Im looking for advice on a few forums online and looking for advice on how to help others basically.

I'm just finishing taking an online course that was originally made about 1977, and has been updated by his Son after his Dad passed away. They have basically been teaching the science and research on how to get the body to heal itself. Theyve been doing amazing things, so much so that I joined on his team to get the course into peoples hands. The course is basically about how to breath correctly, using a re-bounder, nutrition, mental attitude, and most importantly is how all of these are effecting the cells in our body to be well or not. Theirs lots more but, its basically about healing when everyone says you cant heal, I know I'm not doing the course justice by talking about it briefly. sorry.

I'm hoping to get advice on a few things if anyone has a bit of time, I would really appreciate it.

I want to make a powerful impact on benefiting peoples lives, so I feel when I build a website it will have to have some sort of a hook to grab peoples attention to make them realize this can change their lives powerfully. But if my catch-line / hook sounds too business like and outlandish it will turn people away. I would like to target people who believe their health condition cannot be resolved mainly, and also to people who are looking for alternative options aside from what the hospitals can offer. So I'm hoping to get advice on the following sentences to create interest enough for people to share their email address with me so I can send them a brief introduction through email, and after that send them to the course material if they are interested.

Thanks! Any concerns, comments or advice that come to mind are REALLY appreciated.

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Thanks everyone! - All the best. -Kobyn

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